Angelena matthew 11-13-09



While escorting herself home in the dark night, liana heard an ordinary sound. But didn’t pay it no mind. Out of the blue, She heard a mans voice. Breathing down her neck. Within a second, choke slamming lianas back on the hard concrete floor. UGH! Sounded liana. As an fast zip sound of her bra strap. ZiP!... “why are you doing this” as she was dying slowly. “SHUTUP”! shouted the killer. Spitting all in lianas face. Touching all over her feeling violated. The killer heard a car coming. Speeding through the bushes. Grabbing her off the floor. ”let me go” screamed liana. “if you scream again, I am going to kill you” said the killer. When the car was gone, he stabbed liana in the stomach. Falling on her knees to the floor. Grabbing her hair and banged her head on the floor with all his mite. Liana were knocked out for good.
An hour later, she opened her light brown eyes. “OUCH!... my head hurts”. “where am I” whispered liana. Liana was in an all black and white shadowed a banded place. It looked like a flooded banned place. Tools and knives and all typed of different killing objects hanging down from the ceiling. She was locked down on an old bloody hospital bed. You can tell liana wasn’t the first woman that was there and layed on the old bed. The place was very dirty and bloody. You can tell he killed more than one female in the banded place. The killer had other women wallet in formation hanged on an bulletin board he made. Such as social security cards and ids. Within a shot of lianas eye, she spotted a cage. The cage had a naked girl squeezed in a medium cage. The girl was screaming for help. The girl was very dirty and bloody also. Long black hair. It looked like she was dragged from room to room. “this man is sick” said liana. “I know” said the girl in the cage. “what did he do to you” in a shy voice of lianas. “he kidnapped me and sexually assaulted me” said the girl.
“HEY!” shouted the killer. Trying to stop they convocation he came close to liana and sliced her chest with a sharp butter knife. Ripping all her clothes off. “I have two kids and a husband” with a innocent little girl voice, liana. Trying to stop the killer from what he was doing to her. “if you don’t shut up, they would all be dead” said the mean killer. “you go to hell” liana said with a brave strong voice of hers. Slapping her across the face three times and ended it with a punch. Liana started to bleed from her nose and her bottom pink lip. She looked like she has gotten into a fight or a riot.
When the killer left, liana started to move up and down to try to get out of the strap. One leg out, then an arm. Next thing, her whole body was off the bed. Liana rushed to the cage where the girl was. “please help me” said the girl. “don’t worry I am not going no where without getting my hits on this fool. After the cage girl was unloosed, the girl had through on her clothes she had on before she was kidnapped. “what’s your name”? said liana. “my name is lisa” said the girl. “nice name but me have to get this man before we go and have freedom”! said liana. As soon as they were trying to find a big weapon and a hiding spot, the killer had came. He was shocked. He saw that both of his women were missing. He grabbed a knife hibernating for the two girls. Of an blink of an eye, Lisa came behind the killer and knocked him with a thick and long pipe. He fell to the ground very fast. “you idiot” said Lisa. She hit him again “that’s for kidnapping me, hit him again “that’s for raping me” hit him again and that’s for being a women killer” all said Lisa. The killer was bloody and tired. Next thing, liana came and grabbed the pipe from lisa. And Lisa fell to the ground. Liana hit the killer a couple of times. But, not with the same weapon. She hit him with a medal long and humungous chain saw. She turned it on and screwed the killer in the stomach. Blood flooded all over and going everywhere. “I think we done here” said the both ladies.
When they were settled they called for help, police and the ambulance. When the police arrived, they were shocked also. They have never saw a place like this. “ oh my god” said a cop. Look what we got here. Pointed to the killers body. The police had said the killer was on television. They were searching for him in the past 18 years. He was going around killing females When two hours past they were driving in the car with the ambulance and got carried to the hospital. When they arrived to the hospital, the girls had to get checked to see if any scars and disease. Such as ADS and HIV. Liana was fine but she had to get a couple of stitches in her stomach. Also Lisa was fine but she ended with HIV positive. When everything was done they were free at last.
When liana and Lisa got home, they saw they family. Lisa didn’t have any family so she ended up living with liana. Liana got married to her husband. And Lisa became best friends with liana. They were so happy with they lives. And Lisa were happy with her new small family. Next day, Lisa had past away for HIV positive. But liana continued with her life with her two kids and her husband. A week later liana and her husband raised money for Lisa’s funeral and invited friends. Liana didn’t let anything get in her way. She just looked forward and was focusing on her life. Until then, she loved her family and will always will. Liana and her family lived happily ever after. “rest in peace Lisa”. “I will always love you” said liana. She waved to the sky and thank god she lived and looked at Lisa’s shadow in the sky an

creative writing promts

number 242:

1- theres no water
2- mom wont let me
3- i dont have any soap
4- i dont have a towel
5- dont have a clothe
6- have no tub in my house
7- dont have a bathroom
8- its to clean
9- i can catch an ashma attac
10- i just dont want to

creative writing prompts

number 284:

- socks

- underwear/top wear

- earings

- bracelets

- nail polish

- pens

- head phones

- hair accessories

- sidekick skins

- journal (diary)

creative writing prompts

number 240: when i went to church to praise the lord, i needed help to praise. the preacher took me to the stairwell to get a coin and i fund a comb. i combed his hair with it and i went home. told my mom the preacher teached how to pray. next day i went to churched and combed everyone hair. it was the best churched on the block!!!

creative writing prompts

number 96: one day i come home from work. i had went in the living room to check my messages. i went through all of my messages execpt 1. i had clicked and it was saying that i have a bug on my back. i had freezed. i was scared.!!!!!